And then I watched in horror as her red pen slashed through the text, ferreting out all the mistakes I'd missed.
"Don't worry," she said, seeing my face. "Being an editor doesn't mean knowing everything. It means knowing enough to identify a problem. And then knowing how to find the fix for it."
She gave me a copy of the Chicago Manual of Style and told me to go home and read. And I haven't stopped since. Over the past ten years, I've amassed a library of books about the theory and practice of editing. The comprehensive list could stretch on for pages; the list below consists of my picks for best of the best.


Chicago Manual of Style, 16th Edition: Every organization has its own style guide but Chicago is by far the gold standard. I like it because it allows for a lot of flexibility and common sense. The goal of Chicago is not so much to give you a list of rules of what to do and what not to do but to help you think about editing in a way that allows you to make the right decision for the manuscript. James (who is also an editor!) and I jokingly refer to it as "the Bible." (Bonus: it's purty. I love the little splash of Tangerine Tango we talked about a few weeks ago.)
The Elements of Style by William Strunk, Jr. and E.B. White: "Omit needless words." One day, I'm going to cross-stitch it onto a pillow. Though it does provide rules of usage and lists of "words commonly misspelled," Elements is less of a day-to-day editing reference and more of an overview of the craft of writing. It's a short, quick read, full of a kind of dry humor. After a hard day of wrangling with a pesky author over an ungrammatical phrase that simply must stay in his article, I sometimes retire to my bubblebath with Messrs. Strunk and White to reassure me of what I already knew: that I WAS RIGHT and THAT DAMN AUTHOR was wrong.
The Subversive Copyeditor by Carol Fisher Saller. Speaking of dealing with THOSE DAMN AUTHORS, Saller's guide suggests strategies that editors can use to build an atmosphere of trust and cooperation with their authors. She emphasizes that sometimes, doing what's best for the reader doesn't always mean being strictly grammatically correct, provides tips for dealing with workflow and freelancing issues, and is refreshingly honest about her own fallability ("Sometimes I mess up.")
Words into Type, 3rd Edition by Marjorie E. Skillin: This book has a little bit of everything, from copyediting to proofreading to typesetting. Words is in its third decade in print, and is in desperate need of an update for the internet age, but it's still an indispensable resource, especially as a companion to Chicago, for those times when you don't feel like thinking and just want an answer as to whether something acquiesces with or to something else. (Hint: can be pricey, so buy a used copy!)
Technical Editing by Judith Tarutz: Technical editors demand higher rates than regular old copyeditors, and so it's a skill worth building. Tarutz's book gives advice on how to edit highly technical, specialized subject matter and provides case studies to help you build confidence in your new skill.
Line by Line by Claire Kehwald Cook: It is nigh upon impossible to edit your own writing, especially when you are paid to eviscerate other peoples'. I know this firsthand. Cook's book gives you the heart to take up your pen against yourself, and then alerts you to the bad transitions and overwritten sentences that ARE lurking in your prose.
Like I said: definitely not a comprehensive list, but a good, broad collection in my mind.
To my fellow wordsmiths out there in blogland: Any greats you want to add?
Great recommendations! Ted Bernstein is handy, too. See Miss Thistlebottom's Hobgoblins: The Careful Writer's Guide To The Taboos, Bugbears, and Outmoded Rules of English Usage, maybe, or The Careful Writer. It's nice to be able to split an infinitive and explain, with some authority, why that was the right thing to do.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the suggestions!
Delete"Miss Thistlebottom's Hobgoblins: The Careful Writer's Guide To The Taboos, Bugbears, and Outmoded Rules of English Usage" might be the best title ever.
And I agree about explaining with authority: half of the job of editing is knowing how to TALK about grammar and usage (the better to win THOSE DAMN AUTHORS to your way of thinking).
DeleteCarl has a copy of Line By Line; after seeing the red pencil my very dear beta reader used on my last short story (metaphorically - she just highlighted and left notes in a Word doc, but that doesn't have anywhere near the same ring as "red penciled it"), I'm thinking I need to pull it out and peruse it. I think we also have Strunk and White lurking around here somewhere (unless Mother kidnapped them), and I probably should revisit them, as well.
ReplyDeleteI used to love grammar. These days, I write like I talk, which is to say, confusedly.
You're at a good starting point! I'd love to hear what you think of Line by Line.
DeleteInteresting list! I actually have never used any of these! For high school and then college papers, for some reason, we were told to use the MLA book (I think that's what it's called.) I have a copy of the book somewhere that is now probably 10 years old, but haven't used it since.
ReplyDeleteGreat recommendations! I did copy editing at various points in my life and it is stressful as you're supposed to the end of the line but sometimes you still miss stuff and it just killed me!
ReplyDeleteChicago of course is #1, but my other go-to is The Copyeditor's Handbook: A Guide for Book Publishing and Corporate Communications by Amy Einsohn which was the textbook for the NYU class I took on copyediting. I'll have to check out Subversive. Thanks for this list! This is great!
ReplyDeleteI'm seriously contemplating a very belated return to college next year and there's part of me that would dearly love to get an English degree so I could copy edit all day! Thanks for the great list!
ReplyDeleteI have a much beloved copy of Strunk and White also...third edition though so I wonder if they have come up with more misused words in the fourth edition. Have you read Style Ten Lessons in Clarity and Grace by Joseph M. Williams, by chance? I remember liking that as well.
ReplyDeleteOh, and Eats, Shoots & Leaves, by Lynne Truss. Informative AND fun.
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